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"'These flies'," Shunsui quoted, with a faint smile over his teacup once everyone was settled, once again, underneath the tree in the park for poetry and a pot of tea, 'sure enjoy having an unexpected sick person.'"

He let that unorthodox introduction linger for a little bit, with a sip of his tea, before he continued.

"According to the Diary of Shiko, from November 28, 1694, those words were spoken by Matsuo Bashō on his deathbed, dry in his humor and poetic observations even as his corporeal form diminished, allegedly his final words, as he passed on to the next realm, leaving behind an undeniable mark on the art and literature of Japan. And, with that, we also come to end of our class exploring his works and influences, and, as such, I feel it's only appropriate we finish out our class with his last known poem, composed just four days before his death as described by Shiko:

tabi ni yande // yume wa kareno o // kakemeguru

Ill on a journey—
Through desolate fields my dreams
Aimlessly wander.
"
"

Another sip of tea, another thoughtful pause, and then a nod. "So, on this final meeting, let us discuss the final poem. What are your thoughts? Does it seem a fitting conclusion to the life of a poet who made his name on travel and observations? What of his final words? What do they make you think and how do they make you feel?

"Of course," he chuckled lightly here, "this is a topic I myself am intimately familiar with, so, naturally, I have my own opinions, but I should very much like to hear yours. Though if you'd rather just sit and enjoy your tea and think about the poetry that we've discussed in this class while watching ducks or gazing at the clouds...well...that's just more poetry all on its own, isn't it, and I think, at the very least, you might deign to share a verse or two about it ♥."
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Gathered once again underneath the tree by the pond in the park, with a pot of tea and a small pile of texts waiting for the students, Shunsui waited for everyone to get settled before venturing forth into another morning of poetry in the park.
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"Last week," he started, "we focused on a few of Bashō's miscellaneous poems; this week, we return to his travelogues. Very specifically, his Oku no Hosomichi, or The Narrow Road to the Deep North, as it's often translated as ♥. Published posthumously, it is regarded as one of the major literary works of the Edo era, and some of the poet's most moving work....quite literally," he chuckled faintly, "actually, as it inspired many to follow in Bashō's footsteps on this iconic journey into Kyoto, in the company of Kawai Sora, and inspired by the waka poet Saigyō, being sure to visit all the spots mentioned in Saigyō's own prose ♥. 'Every day,' Bashō posits, 'is a journey, and the journey itself home.'"

With that, Shunsui took a thoughtful sip of his tea and let hat settle a little before he continued.

"Another, far more contemporary writer, Kenji Miyazawa, once claimed that Oku no Hosomichi is 'as if the very soul of Japan had itself written it.' I do not think anyone would be remiss in feeling this claim was not too far off ♥. It is also considered an excellent study in Zen meditation. But...let us not focus on what others have said, when we can form our own opinions ♥."

He smiled over at them, took another sip of tea.

"You know how this goes by now; take some time, flip through the book, share your thoughts and ideas as you do, and we'll go from there. Or just sit and enjoy the lovely morning and contemplate your own poetic, meditative journey and the things it might inspire within you ♥."

Even if all it inspired was the need for a good nap.
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"So far in this class," said Shunsui, once class was gathered once more underneath the tree by the pond in the park, with a few little booklets scattered around the circle and a pot of tea ready to be enjoyed, "we've talked a bit about some of Bashō's milestone works, but not too much about his poetry itself. Today, then, we shall change that ♥. Now, the man was incredibly prolific, so one does run into the issue of barely knowing where to start, when picking out poems to look at, so what I've done for us today is compiled a small selection of some more popular or well-known poems, and we'll let you decide which ones you feel are worthy of being discussed ♥.

"Take a moment, get some tea, get comfortable ♥," that, in particular, got a smile out of him, of course, "and take a look through the poems, and when you've decided on one, we'll all have a look and discuss it a little further. Pretty simple, neh ♥? Grab a booklet and some tea and let us begin ♥."
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Gathered once again underneath the tree by the pond in the park, the students would find, in addition to the usual offering of tea, a small stack of books, which Shunsui encouraged them to take once they had settled into their spots.

"Ohayô, my intrepid poetry lovers ♥," he greeted with a smile, a nod, and a gesture toward the books now hopefully in their hands. "Today, we take another step forward on the journey of Bashō, or, perhaps more accurately, a step back, for while Bashō gained his acclaim through his travelogues as we discussed last week, what you hold in your hands now is a copy of his first published work, which isn't a book of his poetry at all, but rather an anthology of poems from a contest in which he judged, published in 1672. Kai Ōi, or The Seashell Game, is a compilation of sixty haiku by thirty-six poets, although only two are by Bashō himself ♥. The entire premise is based on a children's game, wherein two seashells are placed beside each other and compared, just as Bashō takes two poems and compares them, and determines which he finds to be the superior one. One of the best known examples can be found on the pages marked in your books, so let's have a look, at two poems about the color of autumn leaves:

"Our first, from the poet Sanboku:
How like it is to
A midwife's right hand–
Crimson maple leaf!


"And our second, from the poet Dasoku:
I haven't crimsoned.
Come and look!" So says the dew
On an oak branch


"And then, as you can see, a commentary from Bashō follows, wherein he essentially declares the first poem the finer of the two, by 'thousands of leagues.' Which begs the question: do you agree with Bashō on his assessment ♥? What do you think might be his reasoning? We can talk about some of the selections and decisions made in Kai Ōi, and then, of course, perhaps we'll do a little bit of a seashell game of our own ♥."
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It appeared to be another excellent day for poetry in the park, and so Shunsui was, of course, already quite settled underneath the large tree by the pond, with a pot of tea and a drawling lecture ready to go. Now, all he needed was his students, and he would give them all his usual pleased, sleepy smile when they all gathered and got settled.

"Ohayō once more, my fellow logophiles ♥," he greeted, with a duck of his head and a gesture to the tea set before him. "Please, get comfortable, have some tea, and we'll get started in on today's lesson, which will, of course, be focused a bit on our man of the hour, but also on the types of poetry he was known to create. Naturally, Bashō is known as a great haikuist, but his notoriety was spread through other means as well. Last week, we discussed his travelogue, and, this week, we will talk about two prominent forms that really established him in the world of Japanese art and words: the renku and the renga ♥.

Cut for POETRY )

And, again, Shunsui paused, to let the words exist in a state of appreciation, before continuing with the last part. "Of course," he said, "these are just a few examples, and I'd be happy to share more if you'd like ♥. But let us discuss, shall we, the concepts of collaborative poetry and their benefits, or perhaps even some of the disadvantages, and then, perhaps, if you're feeling inspired, we might try a little renka of our own. Any thoughts to share, to start us out ♥?"
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Gathered once again under the largest tree by the pond in the park, with a pot of tea and a little stack of small, slim books waiting in front of his for the students as they gathered.

"Ohayō, oh lovers of art and beauty ♥," he greeted them with the usual sleepy smile, and a gesture toward the assorted things before him. "Help yourself to some tea, and a book, which is the work we will be discussing today. What you have there is an admittedly hastily translated version of Matuo Bashō's Nozarashi Kikō, or, loosely translated, The Records of a Weather-Exposed Skeleton, or perhaps Travelogue of Weather-Beaten Bones, or even Journal of Bleached Bones in a Field ♥."

He had to smile a little at that; it was hard not to appreciate a good, dramatic translation, but he was a little biased.

"Even the perspectives on the translation of the title could provide for an interesting discussion, but, of course, I'd like to go a bit deeper than that ♥. Nozarashi Kikō is the first published travelogue by our man of the hour, written in the summer of 1864, and where we are first said to get glimpses of the style that he would come to be known for, and just as his rambling through Japan itself, the text rambles until it just turns into a series of poems.

"nozarashi o / kokoro no kazi no / shimu mi kana

Bleached bones
on my mind, the wind pierces
my body to the heart.
"

"One of the first poems to set us off on Bashō"s journey, which certainly sets the stage. Today, I'd like you to feel free to just wander through this journey with Bashō, flipped through the book, share your thoughts as they may filter up, or just enjoy the lovely day, the pleasant company, and the erudite prose, and contemplate the nature of such a travelogue, of blending the mundane encounters with the extraordinary and the inspiring words that may arise from them. And perhaps, in your own travels this next week, you may be inspired to do the same ♥. Any questions about the Nozarashi Kikō to start off? Or shall we just dive in ♥?"
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Was there the suggestion of light rain in the forecast for the day? Yes, there was, but Shunsui was hardly about to let something like that spoil the effect of having his poetry classes down at the park, by the lake, underneath a nice tree with hopefully branches spread and thick enough to protect them from the worst of whatever sprinkles might try to dampen their lesson. And so that is where they would find their instructor, as per the correspondence he certainly hoped the moose was on top of relegating, gesturing with a warm greeting for them to have a seat, form a circle and join him, help themselves to some tea while they waited for the time to begin.

"Ohayōgozaimasu, everyone ♥," he then greeted the gathered students as a whole when it was...about time, probably a little bit past it, but why hurry such nice things, neh? "And welcome to the Art of a man who needs no introductions, but, since such things are quite traditional for the first class, I will happily indulge ♥. Matsuo Bashō was the foremost poet of the Edo era, and arguably one of the foremost poets of history. Not only did he come to be known as the Master of the art of the poetic form of haiku, but he is also well known for his travel writings and his paintings. The man also knew how to network himself, getting himself heavily involved in the intellectual scene around Edo--now known as Tokyo--and made quite the name for himself, before flitting off to the wilderness to experience the world from a different, more natural perspective ♥. He was also, it should be noted, apparently trained in ninjutsu ♥."

Did that really have much relevance? Maybe not. But Shunsui, at least, appreciated that detail.

"Truly," he said, "a man of many skills and experiences that lead to his timelessness as an artist that we can still appreciate and delve into today ♥. But we shall doubtless discover more about him as we continue on through these next weeks, as I hope we will learn more about each other, as well ♥. But we have to start somewhere, and that?" He smiled beatifically around the circle. "Is what today is all about ♥.

"I'd like to take a moment to go around and have everyone introduce themselves, of course, so we're all on the same level, neh ♥? Your name, perhaps your own interests in poetry, anything interesting you might have to share, and, perhaps even a favorite Bashō poem of your own ♥. Then, I would like to take the remaining time to just look at one of his most popular ones and discuss it amongst ourselves, just to get us started ♥.

"And, to get the introductions started, for those of you who may not know already, I am Shunsui Kyōraku; while here on this island, I like to teach the Arts of many beautiful things, which seems so appropriate, surrounded as we are by such beautiful people as well ♥. I also own," note that he didn't exactly say run, "the general store here in town, so if you should need anything, don't hesitate to ask, and I find it impossible to choose a favorite poem of Bashō's; it all rather depends on my mood, but I have rather been fond of this one, lately:

"Ta-makura ni hosoki kaina o sashi-irete...

"Or, loosely translated to English:

"Easing in,
her slender forearm
for his pillow
"

Anyone who known Shunsui for more than three seconds should not be surprised by that particular choice, and he gave the class a somewhat sleepy, but altogether very pleased smile before asking, "And who would like grace us with their introduction next ♥?"
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One last time for the summer, meeting under the tree in the park by the duck pond, and on the right day this time, too, with some tea and little concern for the light rain that had been falling all morning. It just meant that Shunsui would do a bit of minor tweaking to his lesson plan (in so far as he had a lesson plan, anyway) to make it a bit more...well, thematic.

"Ohayō gozaimasu, ducklings ♥," he greeted them with his sleepy smile, a duck of his head, and already set to pouring out some tea to distribute to those who would wish to partake. "Hard to believe it will be our last class meeting for the summer already, neh ♥? I was thinking of perhaps squeezing in another focus on a specific poet for our final lesson, but I've decided to be a little more...topical ♥. After all, one of the key elements of haiku is its focus on nature, and so, with a little bit of a rain, we'll take that as inspiration, and go over a few rain-driven haiku to help hopefully inspire our own ♥.

"Let's begin, shall we ♥?"
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Ahhh, Fandom. And it's little...quirks. Shunsui was rather used to most of them skipping right over him, for the most part, but it would seem that, last weekend, he was not quite so lucky.

The whole thing had been completely ridiculous, of course. Any reality where he became the Captain Commander of the Gotei 13 was an absurd reality, indeed. Even if Genryūsai Shigekuni Yamamoto actually did wind up kicking the bucket (and Jūshirō....and Unohana-sama....and....), it certainly wouldn't have been passed off to him.

A faint chuckle to himself. A dismissive shake of his head. Ignoring the odd thrum he felt in his chest. And that missing eye. That missing eye was, unfortunately, not entirely new. And he kept getting flashes of Katen's particularly amused grin, and how she always seemed to get him, just under the left eye...Zanpakutō were reflections of their wielder's souls, after all...and Katen....

He just may have to go have a little...talk with her later.

But for now....he had a poetry class to teach.

And they were absolutely going on a field trip today. Hopefully the students were ready for a bit of a portal hop, though why anyone would object to spending a little time in a beautiful Japanese garden to lounge about and write poetry, especially after a weekend like that, was well beyond his understanding.

"Welcome to Taizō-in, ducklings," Shunsui announced, as brightlyl and amused as ever, as they stepped through the portal onto the conveniently lush grounds on a splendidly sunny day with just the right amount of cooleness, "in northwestern Kyoto, where we shall find ourselves able to embark on a truly authentic Japanese poetry writing experience ♥. Today," he started to walk, his robes billowing around him despite the slight breeze in the air not being nearly strong enough for such an effect, with a small gesture for them to follow him, "we will be participating in Kyokusui-no-en, or 'winding stream party'. Such parties were quite popular with Japanese nobility and poets, where they would go to a beautiful location to enjoy the winding of a stream or the blossoming of the flowers or the falling of snow, play games usually involving poetry, drink very enthusiastically, all just to see where the night may lead them...♥."

There was nothing subtle about that grin to suggest exactly where that might have been, even though that was very clearly not where this was expected to go.

"The winding stream party poetry game is simple," he continued, as he gestured toward the very winding stream they now found themselves at. "We will each take a seat here on the shore, and the person upstream will set a cup of sake....well, traditionally, it is sake, but since this is a class, we have instead a refreshing tea ♥...into the water. Participants must then challenge themselves to compose a poem within the time limit set by the passage of the cup floating towards them on the water. When the cup reaches the poet, they must then drink its contents, either in celebration of the poem's completion or as a forfeit if they have not composed a suitable verse in time. Pretty simple, neh ♥? So find a spot you feel is a comfortable distance for poem composition, and I will pour some tea and set the cup loose, and we'll see how you do ♥."
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The weather, it would seem, continued to be rather cooperative (in the morning, at least), so it would be another session of poetry in the park for the Art of Haiku class! Or possibly just napping. Napping, after all, was merely the haiku of the slumbering world.

But when his little class showed up and gathered in the usual spot, he gave them his usual sleepy smile and began, not with napping, but right into the poetry, although it did touch lightly on the idea:

Cut for Poems! )

"Now, of course, we can discuss some of the works of Kobayashi Issa, or perhaps share some if you know a few yourself ♥. I will gladly offer a few more if you care to hear some, and then, I would like us to perhaps use Issa-san's sense of humor in our own work today. With that, as there anyone who would like to get us started ♥?"
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Since it appeared as though the weather would hold out for the morning, it was yet another day to meet under the tree by the duck pond in the park to talk about poetry, and this time, Shunsui had brought along a nice, light green tea to enjoy along with it, as well.

"Ohayōgozaimasu, ducklings ♥," he greeted them with his usual lazy smile, speaking as he poured the tea and distributed the cups to any who would wish to partake. "Today, we're going to be using our time to speak of and learn of a poet whose name has already surfaced in our discussions already. Hardly surprisingly, considering he is one of Japan's greatest haiku-ists ♥ This would, of course, be none other than Bashō.

"Matsuo Bashō was the foremost poet of the Edo era, and arguably one of the foremost poets of history. He didn't come to be known as the Master of the Haiku for nothing ♥. He was introduced to poetry at a young age, infusing himself in the intellectual culture of Tokyo during his time and teaching for a bit," a small smile and a nod of his head as if to acknowledge that, clearly, some of the truly best poets were also teachers, "before deciding to travel often and wander the wilderness in search for inspiration. Clearly," here, Shunsui chuckled faintly, "it worked ♥.

"So let's have a look at four of Bashō's poems, discuss what we like or perhaps don't like about them, and then we'll use the rest of class to work on our own poems, to share with the class before we depart until next week if you feel so inclined ♥."

With that, Shunsui reached for the first scroll.
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Shunsui had considered calling off the class for the day, in light of an invitation from Rangiku-chan and Shūhei to see how many other Shinigami they could rouse up and drag out for drinks to celebrate his birthday properly, but that was for later, and still holding the lesson could be a nice, easy thing to gesture to should anyone (Nanao-chan) suggest any slacking off on his part. In fact, he could even make the argument that he'd held his class even though it was his birthday! Clearly, he deserved to let loose a little.

After thousands of years, Shunsui honestly didn't even care that it was his birthday, but he most certainly did care if it meant going out and drinking with some of his favorite fellow captains and lieutenants. And it certainly gave him a little something to look forward to. But, for now, with a clear sky and a pleasant morning in front of them, they'd be gathered again under the tree by the duck pond, ready to talk more about poetry.

Especially since today's lesson didn't exactly require...much.

(Most of them didn't, really).

"Ohayōgozaimasu, ducklings ♥!" Greeting them, of course, with his usual lazy, half-asleep sort of smile. "And welcome back ♥. If you'll recall, last week I tasked you all with an assignment,, to find a haiku to share with the rest of the class, so let us not waste any further time and get right to the reason we are here today ♥. Please, share your poem and why you picked it and we'll discuss its merits and faults a little before spending the rest of the time hoping the Muse graces us with her presence once more with a little more writing of our own ♥.

"Who would like to go first ♥?"
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If Shunsui had been even remotely aware that today was a holiday, he would not have hesitated for a second to have called off class in lieu of celebrating it. As it was, though, this was a man who barely remembered that his own birthday was coming up (and that only because he knew it was a few days after someone else's birthday, one he always, always remembered), and so there was class. But it was still one of his classes, so, really, there it wouldn't be very taxing beyond some waxing intellectual about poetry and enjoying the welcoming shade of a large tree in the park.

"Ohayōgozaimasu," he started, with a duck of his head and that nearly ever-present lazy smile on his face, as he invited the students to gather around comfortably in the shade, "and welcome to our first lesson of the Art of Haiku ♥, where we will explore the traditional classic Japanese short form of poetry know for its brevity, its beauty, and its ability to say much in very, very little ♥.

Cut for an actual lesson, what is this nonsense? )

He chuckled a little as he finished. "Well," he said, ducking his head again, this time as if in apology, "not quite my best, but, then again, I am no Bashō, nor do I expect or claim to be ♥! But hopefully, you get the idea. Now if you prefer a more modern pen and paper to compose your poems, please do that, but I have also brought with me some parchment and calligraphy brushes if you'd like to try to make the experience a little more immersive. Take a moment to consider your introduction haikus and towards the end of the class, we'll share ♥. And I also have a little assignment for you ducklings for next week, as well; I'd like you each to find your own haiku in the wild and bring it in and we shall discuss them next week ♥. Any questions before we begin?"
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"Well, well, well, my poetic little ducklings ♥," Shunsui greeted that class with that all-too-familiar by now lazy, sleepy grin, "here we are at last ♥. Our very final poetry class together for the semester ♥. I certainly do hope you've enjoyed my lessons into this lyrically beautiful world, and that you've learned something, even if that something is merely a greater appreciation for the poetry all around us in every day life ♥."

And with that, he started to pour a few cups of that morning's tea and distribute out the cups to the students.

"Of course," he then continued, "you may recall that I have asked you both to come in prepared with a poem of your own to finish out our time together...at least on this particular subject ♥. So, without further ado, let us get into it, and we can share and discuss or just share and find ourselves getting out of class a bit early," here, he threw in a wink, "to enjoy our time in other ways ♥. Let's begin....shall we ♥?"
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"Good morning, ducklings ♥!"

Comfortable cushions set out in a circle? A nice pot of tea to be enjoyed? An instructor with a sleepy smile and very little actual plans for the lesson today? Sounds like yet another week in poetry class!

But there had been a plan for today's lesson, and so Shunsui was just going to get right to it. "Now, I do hope you've both remembered our little assignment from last week," he drawled, 'where we discussed a few poems based on paintings and I challenged you to come up with you ownshare those poems than today, neh ♥? I'll even start, as I've whipped up one of my own ♥."

With that, Shunsui presented a print of his chosen painting, Plum Tree in Snow by Hiroaki Takahashi, cleared his throat in a mildly dramatic fashion, and began:

"A soft, light drumming on the parasol overhead
Are they the wet, droplet of snow that steadily swirl in the air
--or the blossoms finally releasing their hold
on the promise of a season now passed?

Or perhaps just my own footsteps
Or the gentle beat
Of a steady heart.
"

He let the words hang there for a moment, as if made of the very snow he meant to embody with them, and then smiled at his two fledgling poetry enthusiasts.

"And who would like to go next ♥?

"Also," he added, not even a beat later, as if he'd only just now remembered, "if I'm not mistaken, last week is our final week of the class, so I'd like you to spend some time between now and then composing one last poem, any theme or style, to finish this up ♥. But, for now... " And he looked over expectantly to see who might have one ready for this week.
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"Good morning, ducklings ♥." Feeling as though yet another one of those close-call weekends had pleasantly passed him by entirely, Shunsui was very much still in his usual lazily good mood that Monday, comfortably lounging and doling out cups of tea for his students, though this time served in a glass teapot, to better display the blooming, flowering tea he'd gone with for this week. "Today, let's talk a little bit about inspiration, our muses ♥. We've talked so far about poetry sparking from any number of inspirational sources...music, love, history, nature...but what about...other forms of art? What about...." sparing a brief, knowing wink toward Astrid-chan, "paintings, hmm ♥?

"Today, we're going to talk about four poems that were inspired by well-known art. Ater all, they do say that a picture is worth a thousand words, neh ♥? So let's have a look at those words, we'll talk a little bit about how effective or fitting they are to their sources of inspiration, and then, of course, for next week, I'd like you to find a piece of art to inpire a poem of you own ♥. Simple enough ♥. So...let us get started."
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If Shunsui felt any differently today than he would any other day, he would apparently be the last to realize it, but thus was the nature of someone in a relatively constant state of mildly sustain amorousness. And so it was rather business as usual for the classroom, the desks aside, the pillows out, a pot of tea ready to be shared, and a new type of poetry to discuss.

"Good morning, ducklings ♥," he greeted them with his usual sleepy smile as he poured the tea to distribute. "I know we spoke of romantic ballads back in February, but I was feeling this week might be a good time to explore another type of romantic poetry out there, and that would be the ghazal ♥. Hailing from the Arabic world, the ghazal is a short poem that focuses specifically on romantic loss and the beauty that goes along with love despite the pain of having lost it. Which is a lot, for a single type of poetry, but, clearly, it was a broad enough experience to have sparked a whole poetic genre, and so we will have a closer look ♥."

So, after taking some time to go over the very particular structure of a 'proper' ghazal ("While love itself, especially when unrequited or otherwise terminated, is quite messy and chaotic, it is almost as if the structure of a ghazal is a vain attempt to wrangle that chaos into something that might make a bit more sense through it all ♥"), and how the themes had developed overtimem from something religious to something more person, there were, of course, examples to go over.

"So, ducklings ♥," Shunsui finished with another smile, "any thoughts? Particular examples you liked? Ruminations regarding the theme or even its transformation from being religious to romantic? And, of course, I encourage you try your hand at your own ghazal shall you find the Muses to be particularly generous today, as well ♥."
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"Welcome back, ducklings ♥." Once again, there was that comfortable ring of pillows on which to sit, cups of a nice fragrant tea being poured and passed around, and a teacher with a sleepy smile to get things going that morning. "Hopefully, you remembered your assignment from last week to bring in a song or some lyrics you're rather fond of, and, if not, well, I'm sure you can make up something on the spot ♥. Music is such a vast and eccelctic thing that we can all just assume we've simply never heard of your rare and obscure pick ♥. And since you are both quite clever, I'm sure you've figured out that today, we'll be talking a bit about music as poetry, buth in the composition and the lyrical sense ♥.

"Now, allow me, ducklings, to propose to you a question: does music need lyrics to be considered poetry ♥? Poetry, after all, is entirely based on words, is it not? But isn't poetry also based on feelings and emotions ♥? There is no denying that a well-composed piece of music can easily evoke in us the same kind of feelings and emotions that a well-written poem can. And a good deal of successful poetry is grounded in the rhythms, in the beats....the music of the words and phrases, if you will ♥. So I do think it is fair to say that music along, even without words, can be poetry, though you may be inclined to disagree." He gave them a faint grin. "In fact, I almost encourage you to try ♥. What about the words by themselves? Or is the music important to garner the right impression ♥. Ancient poetry, after all, especially epics and battles were set to music; do you think that would improve upon them as you know them? What about the repetition found so often in songs; is it too much fo poetry? Would it weight it down? All very good questions that we may choose to explore today without own selections. ♥

"So let us finally," Shunsui's smile was almost apologetic there, for making them have to do something so tedious as listen to a lecture in a classroom, "get to those songs you've brought in, and we'll have a closer look at their musicality, their poetry, and where the two shall come to meet ♥."
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"Good morning, ducklings ♥," Shunsui greeted his class with his usual sleepy smile, already pouring for them each a cup of tea to be passed over as he spoke. "Now, I wouldn't blame you all if you don't exactly recall, but do either of you remember when we talked about the Orchard Pavilliion Gathering, where a flock of classic Chinese poets descended into a gathering to drink and mingle and write great prose ♥? And I had mentioned that the poets had played a little game, where they would float little phrases down the stream to inspire the next poet to build from that phrase and create some sort of cohesive, collaborative poem ♥?

"Well," he chuckled faintly, "we haven't got ourselves a stream, but we will be pursuing a similar activity today ♥. We'll take turns, offering out a line of poetry, and then the next person will build on it. Just a fun little," easy, "activity to challenge our creativity and see what we might be able to come up with together...even without the added inspiration of alcohol as these things usually included. Perhaps for another time. This is, after all, a classroom ♥.

"One last thing ♥," said Shunsui, his smile going a little apologetic, "before we get into our little game, I would like to mention that I have some homework for you this week, ducklings, but do not fret ♥. It shouldn't be too taxing, and you'll probably be able to guess the reasons why, but for next week, I would like you to come in with a song, with lyrics, to share. Any song at all, as long as there are, in fact, and unsurprisingly, lyrics ♥. That is all. Now, then, on with today's interactive poetry.... ♥ ♥ ♥."
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"Good morning, my little poetry ducklings~ ♥!"

Shunsui had, in fact, managed to slip away to the Seireitei for the remainder of the weekend, in a rare turn of events where returning home was actually the escape from something worse than...well, being home. But there had been sake in the Seireitei, which made the fact that there was also work in the Seireitei more than worth it, especially since there was also beer and whiskey and other forms of wine at his behest, as well, and drinking companions who had been more than happy to remind him of that fact.

And he had definitely confirmed that the island's little alcohol issue was indeed remedied before making his return, and now sat as pleased and in a mild state of inebriation as ever in the classroom, though for now, of course, he would be only drinking and sharing this week's tea.

"Today, I thought we'd delve into something a little lighter on the side of poetry, something a bit whimsical and amusing but also probably deceptively difficult to actually create, and that is none other than the limerick ♥. Now, a limerick is a rather short poem that consists of but one mere stanza, and the idea is to make that stanza count within its very direct structure within just five lines, that follow an AABBA rhyme scheme ♥. Just as the poem itself is short and quippy, so is it's subject matter, meant to be a humorous or amusing format rather than somehting as dramatic or moving as some of the other forms we've discussed thus far ♥.

"Due to their simplistic nature, they often work their way into children's nursery rhymes: Hickory Dickory Dock, for exampe, is a rather iconic example of a limerick, but on the converse side, they also lend themselves very easily to raucous or bawdy varietys, and anyone familiar with this side of the style will surely have a story or two to tell about a man from Nantucket, which I would rather like to share with you, ducklings, but we are in a classroom setting ♥.

"Instead, I have once again availed myself to the copious amounts of printing available to us and put together a compelation of limericks for you to peruse and enjoy, ducklings ♥. Have a look, see if there's any that strike your fancy that you'd like to share and perhaps discuss what makes it work, and then you'll be tasked to work on your very own for the remainder of the time, and hopefully get the chance to share those. Any questions before we begin ♥?"
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"Ahhh, welcome back, my little ducklings ♥!" Shunsui was settled comfortably, as always, on the cushions at the center of the room, looking terribly relaxed, which was just his general state of being and had little to do with the vacation that had just occured, especially considering that he rather considered Fandom a vacation, so last week had just been a particularly nice (barring the whole having to fight with his swords on a separate plane thing, of course) addition to it. "I hope you both enjoyed our little spring break trip as much as I did, but, alas, it would seem we must return to the arduous nature of our continued studies ♥."

Yes, because this class in particular was just so taxing on their academic pursuits....

Ironically, though, they actually would be learning something that day, or that was the intention, anyway, and Shunsui got started on it as he started to pour out and distribute that week's tea to his avid students.

"Now," he began, "you may have noticed that I do tend to be very big on taking inspiration from the world that surrounds us...the beauty of nature, the loveliness of a pretty face, the indulgence of a fine bottle of sake ♥. And since the three of us are fresh from a voyage I certainly hope you found as inspirational as I did, I thought it would be a good idea to have a look at some Kenyan poets ♥. Having just been there to experience the beauty of that country ourselves, no doubt we can better appreciate the work of some of its more note-worthy wordsmiths ♥.

"So here you have a list of some better known Kenyan poets and a little bit about who they are, as well as some of their poetry ♥. As it is rather young as a nation, you'll find it is all rather contemporary...so we'll take some time to look them over, if there's any that strike you particularly well, don't hesitate to share, and let's talk about if any them manage to reflect your own feelings our thoughts about your visit or what you might like to know more about..."

He gave them a lazy sort of grin.

"Or anything else, really ♥."
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Notes had been sent out, and there was an additional on on the classroom door in the case that they had not made it to his students, but hopefully they would find it to be very good news:

♥ ♥ ♥ Happy Valentine's Day, my Poetic Ducklings! ♥ ♥ ♥
My gift to you is a free period this week.
Go spend it with someone you love and write a poem about it for next time!

♥ ♥ ♥ 京楽 春水 ♥ ♥ ♥


And, let's be honest, this was clearly a gift he was giving himself as well.
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"I understand that I may have a bit of a...cultural bias," said Shunsui, settled in their little poetry ring, as he poured for each of the girls a cup of this week's tea and passed them on before settling in with his own, "but I've always been far more partial to the sweet simplicity," aka ease, "of most styles of Eastern poetry, especially when moving toward the far more structured forms of poetry that arise in Western cultures. Take, for example, the quintessential form of Western poetry, the sonnet ♥. Originated in Italy in the thirteenth century, sonnet loosely means 'little song,' and was chiefly used as a method to express courtly and romantic love, but in a very specific structured style, that gained a great deal of popularity in the Rennaissance. Now, obviously, as we've mentioned before working with Japanese and Chinese poetry, translations and languages can make a difference, and there is a vast array of difference sin the details of sonnets based on languages, so, for simplicity's sake, we will, of course, but focusing on the English sonnets, which came about during the sixteenth century ♥.

ABAB CDCD EFEF GG )

"These examples," Shunsui concluded, with a sleepy sort of smile as he cradled his tea, "merely scratch the surface of possibilities, which is why I have brought today some rather old and dusty books with plenty more for guidance, or you can just set off and work on your own sonnets if you're already feeling quite inspired ♥. A bit more involved than your haiku and tanka, but we'll see what you come up with by the end of class ♥. Any questions before I leave you to your verses, mmm ♥?"
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Perhaps a bit inspired by a recent conversation and a general appreciation for the appreciation of snow, Shunsui decided to do something a little bit different for this week's class. There were, of course, two ways he could approach this, and since the portal method was far less work on his end than setting it up with the danger shop, you could probably guess which one he was going to go for. And, really, if anything, this simply made the experience all the more authentic, neh?

So the class would be taking a portal that morning that would lead them to warm and cozy pavililion settled in a snow-covered landscape. "Today, ducklings ♥," he started, "we are not talking about a form of poetry so much as what inspires us to create it, very specifically the yukimi, or snow-viewing, parties that have been a rich tradition in the development of Japanese poetry for centuries ♥. The concept is quite simple, really: you gather together a bunch of intellectual and philosophical minds in a remote location known for its beauty, such as this place, have them drink sake, play games, and see how the creativity begins to flow out of them ♥. We, of course, will be trading our sake for a nice warming tea since this is a school trip," --not, it should be noted, because it was Monday morning or anything--, "but other than that, the point of today is to merely enjoy the beautiful scenery and the excellent company and see what poetry can be sparked out of it ♥.

"Now," lest anyone think that this was just an excuse to spend a morning lazing about in a scenic pavillion, "this is a very popular tradition with artists of all sorts, from poets to painters, authors and composors, and such viewing parties are also popular in the springtime with the blossomoning of trees and the fall, with the changing of colors, and is not strictly a Japanese phenomenon as well. In fact, one of the most famous of such gatherings, known as the Orchard Pavilion Gathering, took place Six Dynasties era of China and wa a gathering of 42 of China's greatest literati, and even included a game called liúshāng, where one floated cups of wine down a river, and when one plucked one out of the river, they must drink that wine and then compose a poem. At least thirty-seven known poems and several painting have the Orchard Pavilion Gathering to thank for their existence, and a great many other such parties have brought so many more into the world ♥.

"Will our own little Kinkakuji yumiki yeild similar results? Let us find out ♥."
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"Welcome back, ducklings ♥," Shunsui greeted the class with the usual sleepy smile as they all got settled and comfortable and had their tea poured (an imperial genmaicha today, for the record) and passed around, "and good morning ♥. Since it was brought up last week in relation to the shanshui poetry we discussed, today we will be shedding a light on a personal favorite type of poetry, and that is, of course, the haiku ♥."

And if one were to guess that the haiku was among Shunsui's favorites because it was relatively short and simple, well...one would not be wrong.

5 | 7 | 5  )

"Let us discuss a little, then, shall we, before we dive in and see how deep we can go with our own haiku and perhaps try a little response with building them into renga ♥."
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"Welcome back, ducklings ♥," Shunsui started the class with his usual sleepy smile, carefully pouring cups of tea for his students and passing them over (clearly it had to be a nice Chinese Clouds and Mist this morning) once they got comfortable and it was time to begin, then pouring one for himself. "Last week, we discussed the origins of poetry and the epic poem, and I tasked you with composing one of your own ♥. Let's start class with what you've come up with, although no worries at all if you haven't ♥. Believe me, I understand that the muse is a truly fickle mistress who will come and go as she pleases, which just makes it all the better when she finally does grace us with her presence ♥."

Something he rather wished his lieutenant would understand when it came to that novel of his, but anyway...

Once they were done with that, he moved onto the lesson of the day.

We sit together, the mountain and me || until only the mountain remains. )

He let the final poem linger a little with a faint smile and a sip of his tea. "I would like," he then said, "for you to find a stirring landscape to inspire a poem for you next week ♥. As you can see by the examples, it does not need to be complex or long; in fact, the simplicity in inherent in the style ♥. In the meantime, though, let us discuss ♥. What did you think of the shanshui style? Do you know of any other examples? What do you suppose the purpose of poems like this may be? The floor," he ducked his head, tipping his hand, "is all yours, ducklings ♥."
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As the students could probably expect each week, the classroom was set up with comfy cushions and a pot of tea on a small, low table at the center (this week, a nice, classic golden tippy Assam), along with a few copies of four different poems.

"Welcome back, ducklings ♥," Shunsui said, once the students were settled and he'd poured tea into each of the cups, then settled back with his own. "I hope your week has treated you well, and, if not, well...then I hope we can spend the next hour or so forgetting all of that, enjoying some tea, and talking about poetry ♥. Specifically, I'd like to go back today...way, way bad...before even my own time...and discuss the origins of poetry, at least in this world. Now, of course, there is no way of knowing what the very first beautiful poetic words uttered and shared by ancient humans truly were, unless I were to go dredging up some very old Souls in my own world to ask them, as poetry no doubt slipped through the lips of people well before they ever developed a form of writing that could be passed down in a way that we, today, could even understand it. So when humans finally manage to chisel out and scribble down marks that we now know as written language, written poetry was not far to follow, as another way remember these stories that had, previously, been recited by memory and habit.

"Epic poetry, in particular, became particularly sturdy in being remembered through the ages, of which we have many examples of today ♥. Before you, I have a few abridged copies of some of the biggest hitters: the Epic of Gilgamesh from ancient Mesopotamia is generally regarded as the oldest of the bunch, of an ancient king's search for immortality after the death of a friend. And of course, there is the Odyssey, an ancient Greek tale of a man's long and arduous journey home after a war, which had it's own poetic retelling in its companion piece, the Iliad. The Mahabharata comes to us from ancient India and just so happens to hold the title of the longest of these poems currently known, detailing the messy embroilments of two families and their struggles against each other for power. Beowulf comes in quite a bit later, but is in the spirit of the other two, detailing a man's attempt to seek out a monster plaguing the land, and is considered not only one of the best Old English poems, but also one of the first known European version of this type of poem, thus easily earning a spot on this list.

"A list that, truly, could go on, but I felt these four were a strong example of the types of poetry we're discussing today, from a variety of different origins. I do encourage you to have a closer look at them in your free time, if you wish, but we'll certainly not be doing an in-depth analysis here. Instead, I wanted us to focus a little bit on how they are structured and written and to what purpose. And, of course, I could spend all day telling you both about that, but I'd say it's much more fun to hear what you might have to say about the matter, neh ♥? You'll notice that, despite the different origins of languages, there are similar structures to the way these epic poems are constructed: many small clumps of stansas and sections, relatively short lines, and, the more you read, you might notice repetition throughout, frequently used phrases or similar structures in the way the lines are constructed. Why do you think that is? Do you see any other similiarities as you skim through the poems? What of the subject matter? What do you think was the purpose of these tales, and why do you suppose they resonated enough with the human psyche to be carried on through thousands of years, mmm?

"When we're finished, I'd like you to try taking a stab at crafting your own epic poems, but, before we get into all that...let's discuss ♥."
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At this point, Shunsui had, alas, resigned himself to the fact that he was likely to be saddled with the earliest class possible, so he'd decided to merely accept that as ironic poetry of its own, and remind himself that dragging himself out at what he firmly felt was a truly ungodly hour was still better than having to deal with the Seireitei and the Gotei 13 on a regular basis.

So he was there with his sleepy smile and his classroom with the chairs and desks all pushed aside to make way for more comfortable cushions, a small low table at the center of the ring with a pot of tea and a few cupsr ready to go for his tiny little class, determined to prove that absolutely nothing that happened outside of a bed before noon on a Monday should be even remotely strenuous or taxing.

"Ahhhhh, poetry ♥," he started, once the students had settled. "Hopefully, that is why you've gathered here today, but if not, well, the more, the merrier, stay a while and have some tea while we talk about painting pictures with our words ♥. On a technical level, poetry is a form of writing that quite often relies on a certain lyricism, sometimes bound by patterns or beats and expectations of a certain form, but not always. Poems can be about nature, about love, about passion; it can also be about history, about events, a form used to spread tales between people back before we had the letters with which to write them down. Poetry is a great many things, ducklings, and in this class, we will explore those things ♥."

He took a sip from his tea before continuing.

"But today," he ventured, "I would simply like to explore what poetry means to you ♥. It is, after all, the first class of a new semester, a time for introductions and getting to know each other in the context of where our education will lead us ♥. And so tell me, ducklings: what do you think poetry is? Do you have a favorite poem, or perhaps poet ♥? Do you write poetry yourself or do you merely enjoy it as a spectator and appreciator of the arts? Share whatever you'd like; we have no other goals for today but to share an appreciation for this mercurial beast we shall discover through the next few months ♥."
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The Danger Shop today was set up like a cross between a traditional class and a medieval scriptorium, with high wooden desks and reams of paper and quills and pencils at each. Bob was smiling. Did that mean you should all worry? Probably.

"Today is our final exam," he said, still smiling. "I'm sure you can guess what that is."

He gave them a moment to try, then clapped his hands together. "Poetry! Write one. Sonnet, free form, even an idiotic limerick. Write us a poem and read it."

He made a shooing motion. "Well, go on."
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Bob nodded to them all. "Right. Welcome back. This is our last class before the final, so let's see what the room is determined to grace us with this time."

He ran his hand through the console, and the end of the room showed a poem )
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"Right," Bob said. "Today we're making the Philosopher's Stone. Only not really, because nobody's ever quite managed it. Although if any of you do, I'll be impressed. Here are our instructions."

He waved at the room, which showed the poem )
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Bob stood at the front of the Danger Shop today, glowering at the console. When the students entered, he drew himself up, looking dignified.

"This system today has decided not to respond to me." He swiped a hand through it, and it sat there doing nothing. "I'm not about to scrawl two thousand lines of poetry in the air, so I suppose we're left with what it will give me."

He glowered at it further, and obligingly a blackboard appeared with a poem on it )
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"Well!" Bob beamed. "It really is lovely to see you all. And to be back face to face." And not to have Fosse running everything. Class was meeting in the Danger Shop today, and it looked a bit like a laboratory, but in wood and stone instead of plastic and metal, and there were bundles of plants all around.

"So, today we're going to start with something simple that I remember from when I was a boy," Bob continued. "It's a charm, instructions for a potion, and a poem!" So totally on topic!

He waved his hand at the room, which he'd finally got to listen to him again, and the poem appeared on a blank wall at the end:

Gemyne ðu, mucgwyrt, hwæt þu ameldodest, )
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Here they were again, another week, another TeamsMeetZoomEx class. Another hour spent with Fosse there, so Bob couldn't slack off teach magic instead.

"Welcome back...half of class." Bob sniffed. "Well, at least no more of you have been swallowed up since last week." Not for lack of trying, Belle.

"I hope you all enjoyed last week's poem, because we're doing another one this week. Since this is, after all, poetry. This time, we're going to read and discuss it, and your homework for next week is to write one in the same style." Because if he had to do this, so did you.

"So, this week's text." He nodded to Fosse, who sent the poem to them.

Bob looked at it.

"Oh, honestly!"
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Class today, as per Anakin, was being held virtually. Which meant that Fosse was in Bob's office running the computer for him, in between bickering about the relative merits of Ragtime versus Big Fish.

"Oh, never mind. Is this thing on now?" Bob squinted at it. "This week's supposed to be introductions, but half of you aren't here, and I don't really want to be teaching this anyway, so -"

Fosse cleared his throat. Bob glowered. "Oh, fine, let's do a poem."

He wrote the title in the air and Fosse sent the text to the students.

At the Sea-Side
Robert Louis Stevenson

When I was down beside the sea
A wooden spade they gave to me
To dig the sandy shore.

My holes were empty like a cup.
In every hole the sea came up,
Till it could come no more.


"Right. So, is this meant to be happy or sad, a comment on the ephemeral nature of sand or the tenacity of water, or did whoever chose this one just think a poem about holes was on topic?" Bob rolled his eyes. "Discuss."
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"Ahhhh, ducklings ♥," Shunsui, seating as could be expected in the usual circle in the park underneath the tree beside the duck pond, smiled around at his small gathering of students as he poured himself some tea into a small cup. "Today's class is a little bittersweet, as it will be our last meeting on this particular subject, but, hopefully not our last meeting entirely ♥."

He threw them a little wink, had a sip of his tea, and then set his cup aside so that he may find the little boards used to share the poetry with the circle.

"We have one more poet I would like us to explore before we depart, however, and that is on by the name of Fukuda Chiyo-ni, one Japan's most reknowned women haiku-ists. Chiyo-ni was a pioneer in the field in the fact that, previously, unfortunately, the voices of women in haiku had been staunchly ignored or disregarded. Why anyone would want to actively exlude the presence of women in anything is far beyond me, but it was through her dedication and passion and inspiration by the hands of, of course, none other than our dear Matsuo Bashō, she set forth to offer a unique voice and open the door for many other women poets to follow ♥.

"Her best known poem is as follows:"

Here, he cleared his throat, and began:

cut for poems! )

Shunsui paused, a soft smile on his lips, as he let that last one sort of linger in the air a little, much like the butterfly of its focus, and then he smiled at the students.

"So," he said, "let us be like Chiyo-ni-chan today and embrace the simple things, let us praise nature for her part in our lives, and create beautiful words to repesent it ♥. Or, since it's our last meeting, feel free to write and share whatever you'd like. Or just listen to nature making her own poetry, too. Our options are vast ♥."
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The class was back in the park again, back with the offering of tea in a nice little set to settle between their small little circle. "Konnichiwa, ducklings ♥," Shunsui said, with his sleepy smile that seemed to indicate that he'd pretty much just rolled out of bed and rolled down to the park. "This week, we're going to be looking at another well-known Japanese haikuist, this one by the name of Yosa Buson. Buson was not only a poet, but also a painter ♥," with a nod and a smile toward Astrid-chan, "from the Edo Period, and he is considered to be one of the best poets of that era. Because of his artistic side, his haiku tend to focus on a stark visual component, as doing with his words what he might do with his paintbrush ♥. Influenced by Bashō, he traveled often through the wilderness of Japan for inspiration and experience, until finally settling in Kyoto in his forties. His artwork can be found in many museums across the world, and, of course, his poetry will live on long in our hearts ♥.

"So let's take a little gander at that poetry, shall we ♥?"

With that, Shunsui reached for his little boards with all his poetry scrawled on it:

cut for poems! )

"So," Shunsui concluded, "as you can see by this very small sampling of examples, Buson tended to take a single image, a single moment in time, a mental painting, if you will, and transform it into the simple effectiveness of a haiku poem. And that is where I would like our focus to be in our poems today, ducklings ♥. Consider a vivid picture in your mind, and paint it with your words ♥. I look forward to hearing what you come up with ♥."
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The weather today wasn't exactly going to be condusive to poetry in the park....or at least not poetry in Fandom's park, which was fine by Shunsui, as he had been saving a particular class for a day just like this one that would involve a nice little field trip, so hopefully the students were ready for a bit of a portal hop, though why anyone would object to spending a little time in a beautiful Japanese garden to lounge about and write poetry was well beyond his understanding.

"Welcome to Taizō-in, ducklings," Shunsui announced as they stepped through the portal onto the conveniently lush grounds on a splendidly sunny and just-right coolness, "in northwestern Kyoto, where we shall find ourselves able to embark on a truly authentic Japanese poetry writing experience ♥. Today," he started walked, his robes billowing around him despite the slight breeze in the air not being nearly strong enough for such an effect, "we will be participating in Kyokusui-no-en, or 'winding stream party'. Such parties were quite popular with Japanese nobility and poets, where they would go to a beautiful location to enjoy the winding of a stream or the blossoming of the flowers or the falling of snow, play games usually involving poetry, drink enthusiastically, and see where the night may lead them...♥."

There was nothing subtle about that grin to suggest exactly where that might have been.

"A winding stream party poetry game is simple," he continued, as he gestured toward the winding stream they now found themselves at. "We will each take a seat here on the shore, and it works out well with our numbers, two on each side. Someone will set a cup of sake....well, traditionally sake, since this is a class," he certainly wouldn't call out anyone's underage status, because they knew who they were, "we have instead a refreshing tea ♥...into the water. Participants must then challenge themselves to compose a poem within the time limit set by the passage of the cup floating towards them on the water. When the cup reaches the poet, they must then drink its contents, either in celebration of the poem's completion or as a forfeit if they have not composed a suitable verse in time. Pretty simple, neh ♥? So find a spot you feel is a comfortable distance for poem composition, and I will pour some tea and set the cup loose, and we'll see how you do ♥.

"Any volunteers for our first poet ♥?" he then asked, settling down on a nice spot and lifting the cup and his jug, ready to pour for some poetry.
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The weather, it would seem, continued to be rather cooperative, so it looked like another late morning in the park talking about poetry! Or possibly just napping. Napping was the haiku of the slumbeirng world.

...Shunsui needed to remember that, that was actually a pretty good line that he was absolutely using in a poem later on.

Anyway! When his tiny little class was gathered in the usual spot, he gave them his usual sleepy smile and began:

"Harusame ni ôakubi suru bijin kana...

Spring rain
A pretty girl
yawns.


"While this particular poem does not follow the syllabic beats one comes to expect out of a traditional haiku, there is no denying that this little snippet from Kobayashi Issa, one of my favorites of the great Japanese haikuists, is still very much in the same spirit ♥. Issa, who chose his pen name because it loosely translated into 'A Single Cup of Tea,' and thus the reason why we are tea-exclusive in our beverage selection today, did a whole series of poems starting with the concept of spring rain and the activities that could occur therein, from this lovely little portrait of a sleepy young woman to a wife with coins in her sleeves, presumably on the way to market, to a child teaching a cat to dance and a flock of ducks being terribly noisy because they had yet to be fed ♥. He tended to use a wry sense of humor in the format's attention to details, as well as simplicity. He grew up in a farming family and was sent to Tokyo to pursue his writing, married three times, was a Buddhist monk and artist," with a nod of deference to Astrid-chan, "and has written over 20,000 poems, with a popularity that puts him right on par with Bashō from last week ♥. A few highlights:

"don't kill that fly
it is making a prayer to you
by rubbing its hands and feet

ducks bobbing on water—
are they also, tonight
hoping to get lucky

having slept
the cat gets up yawns, goes out
to make love


Was it any surprise why Shunsui might have been partial to choosing those last two? But he grinned a little as he added, "And now, ​a personal favorite:

Writing shit about new snow
for the rich
is not art.


"Now, of course," he continued with a faint chuckle, "it was not all fun and games and humor to Issa-san, either. Take, for example, the following poem

"This dewdrop world --
Is a dewdrop world,
And yet, and yet . . .


"...written in response to the death of his first born child when she was but two and a half years old. Whether dealing in the simple pleasures that bring life or reflecting on the sad inevitability of death, his wit and brevity encompassed exactly the appeal in the art of the haiku and established his footing as one of the greats.

"Now, of course, we can discuss some of the works of Koayashi Issa, as we've discussed or perhaps if you know a few, or I can offer a few more, and then, I would like us to perhaps use Issa-san's sense of humor in our own work today as we try to create our own. How's that sound, ducklings, mmmm ♥?"
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Even though Shunsui had a little bit of inspiration for a class that would make use of the danger shop, he figured he'd best save that for a day when the weather was not so amenable. And so it was under the tree in the park by the pond yet again, with the parchments and caligraphy brushes and birdsong and the beverages (he'd just gotten tea now, based on what he'd discerned to be the students' general preferences), and then it was time for poetry.

"Ohayōgozaimasu, ducklings ♥," Shunsui greeted them with his usual lazy smile. "I hope you're ready to learn a little more about the lovely little tidbits of poetry we call haiku today, because that will be exactly what we'll be doing ♥. More specifically, I'd like to use some class time to learn about some of Japan's greatest haiku-ists, look at some of their work, consider their inspirations, and in turn use it to hopefully inspire our own works, as well &hearts. And no examination of Japanese haiku would be complete without looking first to Bashō.

"We've mentioned Matsuo Bashō in this class before, with our very first introduction, though anyone familiar with Japanese poetry would need no introduction. He was the foremost poet of the Edo era, and arguably one of the foremost poets of history. He didn't come to be known as the Master of the Haiku for nothing ♥. He was introduced to poetry at a young age, infusing himself in the intellectual culture of Tokyo during his time and teaching for a bit," a small smile and a nod of his head as if to acknowledge that, clearly, some of the truly best poets were also teachers, "before deciding to travel often and wander the wilderness in search for inspiration. Clearly," here, Shunsui chuckled faintly, "it worked ♥.

"So let's have a look at four of Bashō's poems, discuss what we like or perhaps don't like about them, and then we'll use the rest of class to work on our own poems, to share with the class before we depart until next week if you feel so inclined ♥."

With that, Shunsui reached for the first scroll.
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It was looking like it was going to be another fine day for enjoying some poetry in the park, so hopefully the students would know where to find the class again, and, if not, well...looks like Shunsui was in for a lovely park bench nap in a little bit!

But the nap would have to wait, as they settled in the shade of a beautiful tree with a nice view of the duck pond and got started.

"Ohayōgozaimasu, ducklings ♥!" he started with his lazy, half-asleep sort of smile. "And welcome back ♥. Now, I gave you a little bit of an assignment last week, to find a haiku to share with the rest of the class, and so we'll just get right into it and discuss what everyone has brought to share a little bit before settling in and writing some of our own ♥."

And that's it. That's the whole class. That's all the class was probably ever going to be, which is what made it, in Shunsui's opinion, probably the best class yet.

"Who would like to go first ♥?"
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Since this was a summer class and the whole concept of nature would play very heavily into it, Shunsui decided that, weather permitting, this class in particular would meet in the park, and had ensured that this session's crop of lovely little ducklings had been informed as much. And then it was just a matter of finding a good spot under a lovely tree, probably not too far from the pond, to settle, with an offering of tea and cocoa (alas, no sake for anything school-adjacent!) for them when they arrived.

"Ohayōgozaimasu," he started, with a duck of his head and that nearly ever-present lazy smile on his face, "and welcome to our first session of the Art of Haiku ♥, where we will explore the traditional classic Japanese short form of poetry know for its brevity, its beauty, and its ability to say much in very, very little ♥. Please, help yourself to a beverage if you'd like, and let us begin ♥.

"The concept of the haiku," he continued, in his low, rumbling, drawling voice, "in modern times has been a bit reduced to its basic structure: three lines, broken up by syllables, five for the first, seven for the second, and then back to five to bring us home ♥. Already, though, we are diverging from its original form. Breaking it down this way is common in English translations, but in the original Japanese, the haiku is usually written as just a single line. We are hardly going to flail our hands about technicalities in this class, of course. Our main concern will merely be creating beautiful words to embody beautiful ideas ♥.

"It's far more complex than merely the beats of the words and the way they are arranged, though," he added. "A true haiku will also involve two very important elements: a kireji, or 'cutting word,' and a kigo, which is a relation to a season, or at least some aspect of nature. Things also get a little bit trickier when you're dealing with translations and the like, but we'll not worry about that too much. We are here to enjoy ourselves and make beautiful words; let us not let technicalities stand in the way of such things ♥.

"Let us take an example from Bashō, one of Japan's best-known haikuists, to highlight what I mean:"

He cleared his throat lightly and recited, first in Japanese, then in English:

furu ike ya kawazu tobikomu mizu no oto

Ah, the ancient pond
As a frog takes the plunge
Sound of the water


He paused, tilting his head toward the pond itself, as if expecting nature to respond in kind with exactly the sound described in the poem. Nature did not oblige, and Shunsui wondered if he should have just brought his own frog. He smiled at the students.

"Simple, neh ♥? But also vivid in its emotion, in capturing a specific moment that inspires a specific feeling. We do not need the frog plunging into the water to feel the full effect of the poem. It's simple words are enough; it encapsulates a whole scene, and does so in very little.

"There is much to explore with the haiku," he added, "but as this is only our first meeting, we will save much of that for future classes ♥. For this class, I would like us all to take some time and consider composing a haiku that embodies the moment of ourselves: an introduction by way of haiku, based on the most simple elements of it: one sentence, broken up into a 5-7-5 rhythm, with a reference to nature, but about yourselves. For example:"

Of course he hadn't prepared anything for his own example, choosing instead to tilt his head up and consider for a moment before offering out:

"Cherry blossoms dance
With each soft step like laughter
And sake waterfalls
"


He chuckled a little as he finished. "Well," he said, ducking his head again, this time as if in apology, "perhaps not perfect, but, then again, I am no Bashō, nor do I expect or claim to be ♥! But hopefully, you get the idea. Now if you prefer a more modern pen and paper to compose your poems, please do that, but I have also brought with me some parchment and calligraphy brushes if you'd like to try to make the experience a little more immersive. Take a moment to consider your introduction haikus and towards the end of the class, we'll share ♥. And I also have a little assignment for you ducklings for next week, as well; I'd like you each to find your own haiku in the wild and bring it in and we shall discuss them next week ♥. Any questions before we begin?"
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"Eight weeks," Romeo said once class was assembled, "is not enough time to teach you much at all about poetry. The most I can hope to have done is to give you some taste for it -- a morsel from a feast I hope will sustain you all your lives."

"My question this week is both very easy and very difficult. We've all read, I hope, a sufficiency of poems -- some in class, some outside class. What I hope we may have teased out is what makes a poem immortal. Is it the language? The imagery? The rhythm of the words? Is it style -- or is it substance? Do we like 'The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock' because we think we are Prufrock, or because of the way his tale is told?"

He shrugged. "I've no idea. Both, I would imagine. But I want to hear what you think. Why is your favorite poem your favorite poem? And what is that favorite poem, to start with?"
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"There is a game," Romeo began, once the circle of students was assembled, "much loved by surrealists, called exquisite corpse."

"None die in it; none have died in it, unless by laughing. In it, each person writes down a word or two on a piece of paper and passes it along without looking, until the results are deemed complete and read aloud. The name comes from the first sentence generated this was -- 'Le cadavre exquis boira le vin nouveau.' The exquisit corpse will drink the new wine."

"This is not precisely poetry," he allowed. "But it holds the potential for it. But today, you will generate poetry in much the same way. The laptops on your desks are open to a random text website. Your assignment is to take the chaos it spews out and cut and shape it into a poem. I'll read my own first effort."

picture- cards, Jacks --
which I thought it to it, Pip, their lameness;
and going on the leg of her learning to bed,
may be truly say quarterly or months,
instead of people know how she put me down.
`Now,'
he was a design for the dark man,
and her right by the way behind the sound.
To top of the appearance of the head
and sit me down.
`Now,'


He finished there, and somehow it had almost sounded like poetry when he read it in that tone -- except for not making any sense.
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Romeo gave the students a tired smile as they came in. He'd been dead the week before, which was frightening to think about but relatively easy to live through. As far as he could tell, he'd gone to bed the night of Sunday the 23rd and not woken up until the 30th.

But it was already clear to him that Yurika had not been so lucky.

"I understand," he said, taking his place in the circle of desks, "that the last week did not tread lightly on many of you. If its weight is such that you need to take this session and walk in the sun, or write in your journals, or anything, I've been here long enough that I'll not fault you for it."

"For the rest of us," he continued, "this week is about sonnets. A sonnet is a 14-line poem written in a highly stylized manner. In English tradition -- though of course there are other traditions -- they are written in ten-syllable lines of iambic pentameter, with a rhyme scheme of a-b-a-b, c-d-c-d, e-f-e-f, g-g. And within the corset of that format, great beauty can unfold. Listen:

Fair is my love, when her fair golden hairs
With the loose wind ye waving chance to mark:
Fair, when the rose in her red cheeks appears,
Or in her eyes the fire of love does spark:
Fair, when her breast, like a rich laden bark
With precious merchandise she forth doth lay:
Fair, when that cloud of pride, which oft doth dark
Her goodly light, with smiles she drives away
But fairest she, when so she doth display
The gate with pearls and rubies richly dight,
Through which her words so wise do make their way,
To bear the message of her gentle sprite.
The rest be works of nature's wonderment,
But this the work of heart's astonishment. 


"That's by Sir Edmund Spenser," he said, when he was done. "And your assignment for today is to write a sonnet of your own. Don't chain yourself too firmly to the rules, if they don't suit what you have to say."
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The young -- very young -- woman at the front of the classroom did not look as though she had expected to teach, even though she'd been doing it for the better part of three months now. Her soft voice was laced with a stammer, and faint scarred writing was visible on her hands even though her long sleeves hid the bulk of it.

"Um, hi," she said tentatively, once everyone seemed to be more or less seated. "This week we're t-taking a break from the magical works to discuss an, um, Muggle fairy tale called 'Hansel and Gretel.' I'm ... n-not sure if everyone knows it, so, uh, I'll just ... read a modern retelling. The Brothers Grimm original is in your handouts"

Tara drew a deep breath and began to read. "Once upon a time a very poor woodcutter lived in a tiny cottage in the forest with his two children, Hansel and Gretel. His second wife often ill-treated the children and was forever nagging the woodcutter..." she began, and went right through to, "And they all lived happily together ever after."

And then she stopped and looked at the class. "So," she said, "it seems like H-hansel and Gretel got away with it at the end." But any subversive potential there was quickly undercut by the words of her next sentence, even if the tone showed she didn't really believe herself on this. "But -- we should probably think about how much better it would have been for them if they'd just st-stayed away from things they didn't understand. If they'd just, um, said 'oh, okay, this is a magical house, we should k-keep going,' the witch ... wouldn't have had to trap them in cages. Th-they would have been fine and wouldn't have blood on their hands, and the poor witch would still be alive."

She paused there, drew another deep breath. "Today during class," she said, "I want you to write a reaction to the story from the point of view of the witch. It can be f-fiction or an essay. I'm ... here if you need me."

Poetry 101, Monday

Monday, July 16th, 2012 09:39 am
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Romeo looked wry as he took his place at the front of the class. “I’m about to beg your pardon twice,” he warned. “Once for my absence last week, as I was a puma, and once for the topic we’re taking up this week – poems about coping with death. If you’d prefer not to talk about it, I’ll not think less of you should you leave now.”

Longish lecture is longish. )
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When students showed up to class, they would find Cassie up front with a TV and DVD player set up. There was also a table of snacks next to the DVD player.

"Romeo isn't able to be here today, so we're having movie day, instead." She said a little nervously. "This is the movie the library gave me when I asked for a movie about poetry." She smiled. "And we have snacks, so that's always a good thing."
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"I asked Wikipedia to tell me what poetry was as I wrote this class," Romeo announced, once everyone seemed to be in their seats. It was a small group, so he'd pulled the desks into a circle, and there was a table of cool drinks near the door for anyone who might otherwise be too hot and thirsty to think. "It told me the word poetry comes from a Greek term, poiesis -- making. Though it is likely this is a mere accident of etymology, it struck me as entirely appropriate. For what is poetry if not a way to make our worlds by fitting words around them?"

"To go down some myths: Poetry does not have to rhyme. It doesn't have to fit into a certain form, though the constraint of working within such can heighten the art. In this class, we will write and read as much poetry as I can fit into two months. But I'd hardly buck tradition by depriving you of an introduction week. My suggestion, if you can, is that you fit your introductions into the form of either of two short poetic styles -- a haiku or a limerick. "

He went on to briefly explain the rules around both, while reading some famous examples.

"But if you find you've too much to say to fit into either form, write a different kind of poem and I will listen. You've fifteen minutes to write, then the rest of class is for sharing your poems."

"A few more bits of business, and then you may start. First, I have been informed Miss Cassie Blake is to be my assistant, for which I am profoundly grateful." A pause as Romeo reached for anything more that seemed important. "Oh, and I'm Romeo. Don't call me Professor Montague, I'm not nearly that aged."

And then he stopped, sipped from his water, and bent over a piece of paper, hoping the students would be encouraged to write by seeing the professor doing it as well.

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