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Creative Writing [Tuesday, 5th Period]

The class was back by the main campfire this week. As the class arrived, Rick handed each of them a notepad.

"Afternoon, kids," he said, after the last student had arrived. "Today we're going to be talking about plot."

"In simplest terms, plot is what happens in your story, it follows your character as they go from Event A to Event B, to Event C," Rick explained. "Unless of course you're experimenting with narrative structure, in which case it follows your character from Event C to Event A, to Event B via Event X, and then back to Event C with detours through Events Lambda, Gyfu, and 47."

"Plot structure can be broken down into five stages," he continued, holding up his fingers as he counted the, off. "Exposition, rising action, climax, falling action, and denouement. Exposition is where you lay out the conflict or conflicts driving your story, for example Bob is hiding his unrequited feelings for Carol. Rising action involves the escalation of the conflict in the lead up to the climax, say Bob goes through increasingly ridiculous hijinks in order to keep his feelings for Carol from being revealed. Climax is the turning point in the story, where the drama is at it's highest, oh no, someone's let it slip to Carol about Bob's feelings. Falling action is where you see the fall out from the climax, Bob might run off in shame, or Carol might feel betrayed because Bob was lying to her. Finally, there's denouement, the end of the story where your conflict is resolved, and your loose ends are tied. Carol and Bob might decide to give dating a go.

"In more complex stories, in the course of resolving the main conflict of the plot your protagonist more may crop up that need to be deal with first, or what seems like the main conflict coming to a climax actually results in the main conflict being formed."

"Now some writers like to work from outlines, where they have all the major plot points all laid out, while others start with an idea and see where it goes from there," Rick said. "I'm not advocating either method, what works for one person mightn't work for another. However, and I cannot stress this enough, whichever you use, always make sure to periodically read though your work to make sure your plot is coherent. Get another pair of eyes if you have to, but do it, otherwise your reader is likely to fall into a plot hole and never be seen again."

Rick held up his notepad. "In order to show just how important coherent plot structure is, we're going to play a game. It's a version of Exquiste Corpse. On the first page of your notepads you'll all write a conflict," he said, then scribbled something down in his notepad. "Then turn to the next page and pass it along to another person in the class, who without looking at the previous page will write the rising action, they'll then turn it to the next page and hand it off to someone else, who'll write the climax, and then another will write the falling action, and another the denouement. Then, you can start all over again on the next page. After about fifteen minutes, we'll read out the corpses and see what kind of stories we've written. Got that?"

He waited for the class to nod along then continued. "After we've finished reading out the corpses, you can spent the rest of the class working on your stories, either by yourself, or brainstorming with a classmate."

[OOC: OCD up.]

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Re: Sign In - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] a-demosthenes.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 04:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Valentine Wiggin
icecoldfrost: (Emma is Plotting)

Re: Sign In - CW [Week Three]

[personal profile] icecoldfrost 2009-07-21 04:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Emma Frost

Re: Sign In - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] not-jaded-yet.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 04:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Jennifer Walters
lovemykilt: (impish)

Re: Sign In - CW [Week Three]

[personal profile] lovemykilt 2009-07-21 04:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Priestly
vanillajello: (Being sisterly.)

Re: Sign In - CW [Week Three]

[personal profile] vanillajello 2009-07-21 04:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Kate Gregson

Re: Sign In - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] joan-notjane.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 05:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Joan Girardi

Re: Sign In - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] 17andinfected.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 05:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Shilo Wallace

Re: Sign In - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] asgardcreated.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 08:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Jon O'Neill

Re: Sign In - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] heartflames.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 09:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Eleanor Robinson

Re: Sign In - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] ihavenocodename.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 10:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Jean Grey
iamnotallgirl: (Jill - telling secrets)

Re: Sign In - CW [Week Three]

[personal profile] iamnotallgirl 2009-07-22 02:09 am (UTC)(link)
Jill McTeague

Re: Sign In - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] notyourpawn.livejournal.com 2009-07-22 02:44 am (UTC)(link)
Alice Liddell

Re: Writing Corpses - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] joan-notjane.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 05:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Rising Action:

The cars on the car-carrier in front of them started rolling off the back of the truck.

Re: Writing Corpses - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] 17andinfected.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 05:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Climax:

With a howl of pure determination, the her fiance James threw himself at the gunman.

Re: Writing Corpses - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] robinthefrog.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 06:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Falling Action:

Finally the dust cleared. He held the hammer in one hand and looked around. "Uh....oops."

Re: Writing Corpses - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] notyourpawn.livejournal.com 2009-07-22 02:50 am (UTC)(link)
Denouement

"I should have known," the inspector said with a sigh. "One should never trust a farmer wearing a bowler hat."

Re: Writing Corpses - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] a-demosthenes.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 04:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Valentine tapped her pen against her chin in thought a moment before coming up with an exposition.

Exposition:

Duncan held secret ambitions to take over the world, one way or another.

Re: Writing Corpses - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] not-jaded-yet.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 04:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Jennifer continued on from there.

Rising Action:

They were caught utterly surprised when the ground cracked open and out sprang angry living garden gnomes.

lovemykilt: (visionary)

Re: Writing Corpses - CW [Week Three]

[personal profile] lovemykilt 2009-07-21 04:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Climax

The timer ticked down to zero, and the gates swung open, releasing the dogs with bees in their mouths (so when they bark, they shoot bees at you) upon the unexpecting villagers, all of whom were allergic to bee stings.

Re: Writing Corpses - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] joan-notjane.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 05:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Falling Action:

She decided her best course of action was to hide under her desk for the rest of the day.

Re: Writing Corpses - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] 17andinfected.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 05:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Denouement:

When the smoke finally cleared, Adam and Jessica looked around, and began screaming with joy. The plan had worked, and they had saved their town from the invasion. They began ecstatically embracing each other, and letting out cries of "We did it!" and "Oh God, it worked, it worked!"

Then the government plane that was supposed to fly over two days ago, with the bomb that would have stopped the alien horde in its tracks, arrived and dropped its payload.

The End

lovemykilt: (thinking)

Re: Writing Corpses - CW [Week Three]

[personal profile] lovemykilt 2009-07-21 04:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Exposition:

"Mom, Dad," Joanne said after making sure her parents were sitting comfortably. "There's something I need to tell you."

Re: Writing Corpses - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] 17andinfected.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 05:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Rising Action:

It was not until the guns began firing outside that Olivia's attention was finally torn from her book and placed on the scuffle on the roof of her apartment building.

Re: Writing Corpses - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] asgardcreated.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 08:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Climax:

The timer on the bomb, which had been hidden away and ticking down this whole time, hit zero and there was a sudden and loud explosion that rocked everyone.

Re: Writing Corpses - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] a-demosthenes.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 10:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Falling Action:

Once they had all jumped into the Porche, Michael stepped on the gas and they road down the road into the sunset, leaving the others behind in a wake of yellow dust.

Re: Rading Corpses - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] 17andinfected.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 05:15 pm (UTC)(link)
From here (http://community.livejournal.com/fandomhigh/2176070.html?thread=141507910#t141507910):

Duncan held secret ambitions to take over the world, one way or another.

They were caught utterly surprised when the ground cracked open and out sprang angry living garden gnomes.

The timer ticked down to zero, and the gates swung open, releasing the dogs with bees in their mouths (so when they bark, they shoot bees at you) upon the unexpecting villagers, all of whom were allergic to bee stings.
She decided her best course of action was to hide under her desk for the rest of the day.
When the smoke finally cleared, Adam and Jessica looked around, and began screaming with joy. The plan had worked, and they had saved their town from the invasion. They began ecstatically embracing each other, and letting out cries of "We did it!" and "Oh God, it worked, it worked!"

Then the government plane that was supposed to fly over two days ago, with the bomb that would have stopped the alien horde in its tracks, arrived and dropped its payload.

The End

Re: Rading Corpses - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] notyourpawn.livejournal.com 2009-07-22 03:34 am (UTC)(link)
From here (http://community.livejournal.com/fandomhigh/2176070.html?thread=141505606#t141505606)!

Once upon a time there was an evil magician who liked turning people into frogs.

The cars on the car-carrier in front of them started rolling off the back of the truck.

With a howl of pure determination, the her fiance James threw himself at the gunman.

Finally the dust cleared. He held the hammer in one hand and looked around. "Uh....oops."

"I should have known," the inspector said with a sigh. "One should never trust a farmer wearing a bowler hat."

Re: Talk to the TAs - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] a-demosthenes.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 04:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Of course Valentine was there, looking incredibly amused after the activity while jotting down things for her story. She used to play games like this with her brothers back before Ender left for Battle School; in a way, she continued the game with Peter, just taken to an extremely complex level.

Re: Talk to the TAs - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] asgardcreated.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 08:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Jon was a few minutes late, but he had a really good excuse for it.

Re: Talk to the TAs - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] a-demosthenes.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 10:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Valentine always did like to strike up a certain...repartee with her fellow TAs when she could; Jon being late only made it easier for her to choose an angle from which to talk to him, looking at him and his tardiness with an expectant quirk of her eyebrow.

Re: Talk to the TAs - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] asgardcreated.livejournal.com 2009-07-22 08:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Jon just grinned and shrugged. "Had to find clothes."

No, he wasn't about to elaborate.

Re: Talk to the TAs - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] a-demosthenes.livejournal.com 2009-07-22 08:34 pm (UTC)(link)
"Good morning?" Valentine guessed, although, really, she was just being complimentary, because she figured it probably had to do with the fact that Jon had been a dog, and, sure enough, he wasn't now.

Re: Talk to the TAs - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] asgardcreated.livejournal.com 2009-07-22 08:37 pm (UTC)(link)
"Nope. Changed back." And had been naked. On Claire's floor. He should probably wash her blanket before giving it back.

Re: Talk to the TAs - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] a-demosthenes.livejournal.com 2009-07-22 08:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Valentine rolled her eyes a little, but she grinned. "It's no fun if you answer honestly, Jon," she needled. "It's even creative writing class!"

Re: Talk to the TAs - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] asgardcreated.livejournal.com 2009-07-23 04:50 pm (UTC)(link)
"How can I get more creative than 'I turned into a dog for several days, and woke up a half hour ago, naked on my girlfriend's floor and had to make a mad dash across the campgrounds with her blanket wrapped around me'?"

Re: OOC - CW [Week Three]

[identity profile] 17andinfected.livejournal.com 2009-07-21 05:15 pm (UTC)(link)
I'll second that.